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Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Teaser Tuesday: 431 Days With a Concussion

Long time no Teaser Tuesday! This is a poem I wrote for English class on May 5th. Enjoy!


"431 Days With a Concussion"


*SNIP*

10 comments:

Tahereh said...

wow. so powerful!

thanks for sharing :)

Kate Hart said...

I don't have the faintest idea how to crit poetry, but kudos to you for sharing. <3

Kara said...

I hope your concussion is healed!!

Caitlin R. O'Connell said...

That was really nice, BC. *hugs* It's quite powerful, no wonder your teacher cried.

Unknown said...

im not a great judge of poetry but i do like this :)

Karla Calalang said...

Wow, I love it *hugs*

Brianne Carter said...

This almost made me cry. I know that battle with pain - not to the same extent as you do, but I do - and so I know that feeling. It just sucks. I really, really hope your concussion heals. I'm praying for you.

Rachael said...

*hugs* It's beautiful BC. :)

Anonymous said...

Banana Man

Anonymous said...

I really feel the "Banana Man" comment. Banana man understands how the pain is. He knows the struggle. It might last 42 years, but stay strong. <3
I feel as is there is a little bit of banana man in all of us.

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