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Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Teaser Tuesday: 431 Days With a Concussion

Posted by bclement412

Long time no Teaser Tuesday! This is a poem I wrote for English class on May 5th. Enjoy!

"431 Days With a Concussion"

*SNIP*

10 comments:

Tahereh said...: wow. so powerful!

thanks for sharing :); May 18, 2010 at 3:10 PM
Kate Hart said...: I don't have the faintest idea how to crit poetry, but kudos to you for sharing. <3; May 18, 2010 at 3:11 PM
Kara said...: I hope your concussion is healed!!; May 18, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Caitlin R. O'Connell said...: That was really nice, BC. *hugs* It's quite powerful, no wonder your teacher cried.; May 18, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Unknown said...: im not a great judge of poetry but i do like this :); May 18, 2010 at 3:43 PM
Karla Calalang said...: Wow, I love it *hugs*; May 18, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Brianne Carter said...: This almost made me cry. I know that battle with pain - not to the same extent as you do, but I do - and so I know that feeling. It just sucks. I really, really hope your concussion heals. I'm praying for you.; May 18, 2010 at 6:27 PM
Rachael said...: *hugs* It's beautiful BC. :); May 18, 2010 at 8:22 PM
Anonymous said...: Banana Man; April 23, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Anonymous said...: I really feel the "Banana Man" comment. Banana man understands how the pain is. He knows the struggle. It might last 42 years, but stay strong. <3
I feel as is there is a little bit of banana man in all of us.; April 23, 2013 at 7:56 AM

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