Long time no Teaser Tuesday! This is a poem I wrote for English class on May 5th. Enjoy!
"431 Days With a Concussion"
wow. so powerful!thanks for sharing :)
I don't have the faintest idea how to crit poetry, but kudos to you for sharing. <3
I hope your concussion is healed!!
That was really nice, BC. *hugs* It's quite powerful, no wonder your teacher cried.
im not a great judge of poetry but i do like this :)
Wow, I love it *hugs*
This almost made me cry. I know that battle with pain - not to the same extent as you do, but I do - and so I know that feeling. It just sucks. I really, really hope your concussion heals. I'm praying for you.
*hugs* It's beautiful BC. :)
I really feel the "Banana Man" comment. Banana man understands how the pain is. He knows the struggle. It might last 42 years, but stay strong. <3 I feel as is there is a little bit of banana man in all of us.
i love the comments and appreciate each and every one. i try and return them on your blogs ;)
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