Honestly, I think it should feel more cathartic than euphoric. Oo I'm not sure, though. Love the descriptions.-HJ/Jaece
Wow, I remember this from FNW! Again, love the <3 the raspberry kisses. And sentence fragments FTW! :D
I love this scene. It is definitely freaky, but it makes so much sense in a twisted kind of way. Great job! :)
Very very intense
Very eerie. It's just so dark and twisted. You write this incredibly well where flows like poetry almost.
I like your writing, though it made me wince. I want to know more about DamagedXD
I read this yesterday but the net was acting up. *sighs*But on the bright side, I got to read this again. It's extremely eerie and twisted and you can tell loads from the state of mind of the character just then. I just wonder what happened before this scene. Love the descriptions; especially this one:Pomegranate floods. Residue of raspberry kisses stain my arms. Mob them.I think that's the best description I've read in a long time.Lyn:: Lynkay @AW
Very intense with vivid word choices. It makes you feel so sad for the person, and also you feel angry because you don't want them to hurt themselves like that.
you describe everything so well...love the use of fragments. it really shows the emotion well. great snip!
So intense. So vivid. So engaging. So ... frightening.
I remember this! And it's just as creepy the second time as it was the first. *shivers* Great snip! :)
Oh dear, that IS vivid. It creates such an image, it kind of made me wince. Which is good... I think. No, definitely, haha. I don't wince often.
Great scene! I can really feel for her. Awesome teaser!
i love the comments and appreciate each and every one. i try and return them on your blogs ;)
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